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Thine Eyes by *LittleRockinDragon:iconLittleRockinDragon:



Over the forest,
And mountains high,
A great winged beast,
Flies through the sky,

To see the lands,
Unknown to thee,
To see and feel,
And tell to me,

What great wonders,
Come from the wood,
And stones of thunder,
Shine like they should.

Oh! great winged beast,
Please tell to me,
What thine eyes,
Have sworn to see.
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I've been working on this for the last few days.
This was supose to be a song, but it turned out more like a poem ^^;
I did it so I could get into the ~song-dragons-cavern, which is really cool I might add :D
=goldblaze owns it, so, yeah, figure I might as well throw that in there.

Anyways, if anyone as any tips on song writing, let me know, because I'd like to write a song, not a poem. :D

so yeah.

Medium:
No. 2 7mm pencil
My imagination


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~13Nyx:icon13Nyx: May 13, 2008, 5:32:37 PM
It's so nice :3 I love the whole flowiness of it all X3

A basic song would have
verse
verse
chorus
verse
(bridge)
chorus
chorus
(bridge)
verse or chorus
verse or chorus

The bridge may take place at either or both spots and can repeat twice sometimes.

:3

Other than that you have to get used to writing one...

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Hey, Hey, Deelee! Shki-dooooosh!

Spiffinriffic!


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*LittleRockinDragon:iconLittleRockinDragon: May 13, 2008, 5:47:42 PM
:wow: thank you!! you have helpped me beyoned belif!!! :hug:

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:blackrose: "Stand your ground, don't give in" :blackrose:

Never stand begging for that which you have the power to earn
~13Nyx:icon13Nyx: May 13, 2008, 5:57:22 PM
LoL didn't think it would help that much XD

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Hey, Hey, Deelee! Shki-dooooosh!

Spiffinriffic!


A.K.A.
Orealisk


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*LittleRockinDragon:iconLittleRockinDragon: May 13, 2008, 6:57:07 PM
oh yesh it does! thanks! :hug:

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:blackrose: "Stand your ground, don't give in" :blackrose:

Never stand begging for that which you have the power to earn
~Fang-the-white-wolf:iconFang-the-white-wolf: May 13, 2008, 8:34:59 PM
my mind has died, so it's hard to comment. but I think ya did a cool job, even though it sounds like a poem.
sorry my brains have melted or I wouldda commented better^^; sorry:hug:

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Humans fear the beast within the wolf because they fear the beast within them selves....
~whitefangkiba:iconwhitefangkiba: May 13, 2008, 8:48:57 PM
nice

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who is howling with the wolves, but isn't one of them shouldn't be surprized if he gets biten...
~TheNightWind:iconTheNightWind: May 14, 2008, 4:21:19 AM
Your writing tops my writing by a mile!!!

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Free birds fly high, while others soar.
*LittleRockinDragon:iconLittleRockinDragon: May 14, 2008, 9:54:23 AM
lol, i doubt that! but thank you for the comment! :hug:

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:blackrose: "Stand your ground, don't give in" :blackrose:

Never stand begging for that which you have the power to earn
*LittleRockinDragon:iconLittleRockinDragon: May 14, 2008, 9:57:16 AM
:hug: thanks!

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:blackrose: "Stand your ground, don't give in" :blackrose:

Never stand begging for that which you have the power to earn
*LittleRockinDragon:iconLittleRockinDragon: May 14, 2008, 9:58:29 AM
:hug:
Don't worry bout it Fang, i understand, kies?

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:blackrose: "Stand your ground, don't give in" :blackrose:

Never stand begging for that which you have the power to earn